Used when needed, these words can be powerful, but when they are used unnecessarily, they can weaken a sentence and undermine the impact the writer wants to deliver.
Identifying these words and testing to see if they are truly necessary is one of the keys to writing powerful sentences.
In general, this determiner means an unspecified amount of something: an object, of people or anything that can be measured or not measured. It’s also used as a pronoun: Some of us left early. The unspecific nature of this word makes it detrimental to sentences when used unnecessarily.
Compare these sentences…
- “I want some candy,” said Becky.
- “I want candy,” said Becky.
- “I want one candy,” said Becky.
- “I want your bag of candy,” said Becky.
- “I want all the candy in the world,” said Becky.
In this instance, sentences two through five indicate how Becky is feeling and may hint at her personality. Is she indecisive, watching her sugar intake, greedy or unrealistic? By choosing another word or leaving out some altogether, the sentence becomes stronger and reveals more about Becky.
A few more examples of when you can eliminate some…
- Without some additional funding, the idea would never fly.
- Without additional funding, the idea would never fly.
- I enjoy my day when some family come to visit.
- I enjoy my day when family comes to visit.